Roses are red violets are blue i've never
Met anyone as beautiful as you yes
We are talking about you the one
And only beautiful teacher Mrs Tele’a
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I am hopelessly in love
Since the day i met you
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Sugar is sweet
Just like you
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sunflowers are yellow
You probably thought this was a
Poem but these are just
Gardening facts.
Hi, Marcella i like how you wrote a poem about Mrs Tele'a
ReplyDeleteThanks but you the one who did it
DeleteKia ora Marcella, Your poem made me laugh a lot when I saw the ending about the Gardening facts. You should write more poems in the future.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Marcella,I love how you wrote about Mrs Tele'a. I didn't know that you were good at writing poems but keep up the good work !!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Marcella
ReplyDeletei really love your poem there.It really made me laugh and that is a nice poem in the first paragraph and yess i love Mrs Telea she is the best teacher you will ever had.
Kia ora Marcella and greetings to you I really liked how you said how Mrs Tele'a is beautiful and of course she is, but this poem made me laugh out loud keep it up I really want to see more of them poems going
ReplyDeleteYour sincerely Monika
Hey Marcella, love the poems, it's like you've copied it from online but I hope you didn't. Keep up the hard work and keep been a good girl.:)
ReplyDeleteMalo Marcella, I like the way that you wrote a beautiful poem about Mrs Telea. You are right Mrs Telea is beautiful and a amazing teacher. One thing that you could maybe work on is setting your lines up. But overall you did a amazing job with your peom. Kepp the good work up!
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Chastyti